Feedback for Peers!

Sarah:

Argument – To display an accurate representation of the vocal accordion group on campus/provide them publicity/self-identification (goal)

·        You should be interested in them (musical interest)  

·        Because: It’s fun, playful musical group

Strength – Artistically talented/ good communication between primary audience and self (For design) – great job testing the idea and getting votes/ easy to read

Develop – maybe along with this insignia develop a slogan as well! Like, an actual saying that the whole group (musical group) agrees on. Once you get the final draft of the written insignia, use Photoshop to create contrast and special effects. Make it bold make it classy make it memorable.

Charlie:

Argument— (goal) to display and inform what club indigo is, to get others involved with club indigo.

I believe the argument is to go to club indigo because there is food entertainment and social interaction.

Strength – solid self-identification of what Club Indigo is good direction and layout in format. I like how you provide a where to go for more information page.

Develop – more engaging slide designs (that will most likely come with more pictures), make your argument readily available earlier in the slide rather than later. Looks good! Keep movin’. (slow down slide movement)  

James :

Argument – (goal) to inform about online piracy)

Fail to understand what the argument is (I get the goal), but find a better way to create a clearer argument. My assumption of the argument is as follows:

Do not pirate online because there are dire consequences.

Strength – I really love the color contrast. It’s not too plain, not too bold. Good job drawing the viewers attention to the statistics with the color contrast!

Develop – Develop blank space on the bottom! Really interesting visual J also think about having border!

Casandra:

Argument – You should become involved in Greek Life in order to gain experience and leadership

Goal – to inform about Greek Life and its benefits

Strength – I like the different effect this digital media artifact hits. I like the way it leads from point (a) to point (b), the colors are good for contrast as well.

Develop – the transfer time was way too fast and I wasn’t able to read the information which caused a loss off attention and lack of learned information. Add some more graphics and make it glow. Remember to leave the conclusion with an impact! J Good Job.